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Nora O’Dowd's avatar

So moving and beautifully done! Bravo!

Paul John Dear's avatar

Thank you Nora 🙏

The Bard of Tysoe's avatar

Wow! Such a difficult form of verse to compose in, and you have knocked it out of the park! I am incredibly impressed. I also love the double-exposure at the top: there is a mood to it that goes well with the poem below. Thank you so much for sharing.

Paul John Dear's avatar

Once more many thanks to you Stephen. I love the note with your restack and am in full agreement with T.S.

The structure teaches depth.